Blog Reviews

Jacqueline Pridgett
Jaqueline I thoroughly enjoyed reading your article and I believe your Kll Bll article was very strong. I believe that your Hidden Histories article could have been a little stronger by offering more support. In your post you stated some great ideas but they will come across more strongly if you back them up with factual evidence. Also, if the blog post was a little bit longer I could have really been able to hear your opinion. I would have liked you to delve into the topics a little more. However, the structure was good and I liked the organization. You also found a way to hook me and I was interested in your post from the beginning..

Armando Teran
I really like your article on Jersey Shore and it was very interesting from the beginning. However, on paragraphs two and three I was a little bit confused of the point you were trying to make so you could possibly clear that up a bit. One way to clear that up would be to make a concise statement and then follow it up with facts. I also like your hidden histories article and I could really hear your voice coming through. Once you present your ideas I would like to hear more about your topic because you introduced your article so well. The only I would give is to het me hooked earlier with a more enticing intro but other than that it was really good!.