Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Week 3 Blog Reviews

Review for Morgan Paulson
Morgan I really liked your articles. I liked how you were engaged throughout the writing of your posts and constantly brought up interesting facts. I liked your use of questions throughout your post because it made me stop and ponder the points you were trying to make. One thing that I think you could improve is to answer your questions more throughout your posts. I know a lot of them are supposed to be rhetorical but if you answered some of them I would be able to more fully understand your stance. Other than that, I thought they were solid posts and I’m really excited to keep reading your work!

Review for Waliah Shamsiddeen
Waliah did not have these posts created.

Review for Darien Allen
I really liked your posts; I thought they were extremely informative. While reading your posts, I feel like you were very educated on the topics and thoroughly understood the reading. On your 9/2 article I think it could be a little more interesting if you stated whether you agree with Brook’s assessment. I do not really have any other criticisms because your articles are so fantastic. I liked how you supported every fact you presented. I also never questioned the relevance of what your facts because you tied in everything very nicely. Keep up the good work!

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