Waliah Shamsiddeen – No current blog postings.
Morgan Paulson –
I really enjoyed your article and once again you prove your ability to thoroughly research a topic. I liked your interpretation of the photo and your analysis of Frida and Diego’s relationship. I also like your article on robots and I believe your article could be improved if you support your claims more. You do a good job of citing your sources and backing up what you say, but more examples of how robots have artificial intelligence would help your essay. Also, I like your stance in the blog post but it is semi-subtle at first. A more definitive opinion and stance would make your essay more appealing and intriguing. Overall it was a very solid effort.
Darien Allen-
I also really enjoyed your analysis of the painting you selected. I believe that you choose a painting with many meanings which is difficult, but you were able to interpret all of the images nicely. I believe your article on the painting is very strong and the only slight critique I could add is concerning your abstract science article. I believe that you could summarize the article while weaving in your opinions. The points you make are justified by the facts you present, but the whole entire blog post would be more interesting if you speckled your opinion throughout your writing. I liked the flow of your post and I believe that your voice was very present and I honestly enjoy reading your work!
Hello my name is Justin Alexio Vizcaino and I am just starting my junior year at ASU. I love surfing and doing fun outdoor activities. I am currently living in Los Angeles training to be a better improviser. I also love to write poetry so if you like that artsy stuff let me know and we could have a wonderful discussion! Also I love football and the Phoenix Suns. Steve Nashty for life.
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